Hope everyone had a great Christmas. Now moving on to what I normally do :)
Oddly, it was place and not a person (or a specific person at least) that inspired the following poem. I find that the serenity of a place can do as much as any other form of inspiration, sometimes more so. And I have found, as I have gotten older, that my romanticism is just as bound to place as it is the idea of romantic/courtly love. Perhaps it is my view on the universe itself that has changed this. Anyway, what follows is the result of such a view, emotion of hope and future mixed with the ideal of place.
'A Future Promise'
The beauty of dawn long ago
would not...
compare to what I have seen.
An instant, all it took;
a connection joined between the seconds
reaching into the depths of this soul.
A world born in a universe past
could not...
bespeak the enfolding joy,
a word or two remembered
through the memory of tomorrow
waiting beyond a veil of stars.
This simple emotion meant for other days
should not...
drive into the core of my being.
A wonder beyond hope,
a saddening, frightful reminder
of this life I so long for,
resting upon that distant shore.
C.
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I am intrigued by a poem entitled "Future Promise" but which has "would not", "could not" and "should not" so prominently placed.
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I would like to say it was intentional, but it wasn't :)
That is the problem with hope and false hope it seems... and empty promises even of the future.
Even if it's uintentionally it still makes for an intriguing poem - I think it's your subconscious talking there (or maybe it's my subconscious reading something into it - I know my s/c is highly suspicious of promise)
Hope you had a great holiday as well!
madameboffin: I am sure my subconscious was victimising me in this... it always does :)
angela: I did... looking forward to new years too :)
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