I had intended to write something more substantial, but I realised I am going to have a rather long post for my birthday (or couple of posts... I had meant to write something about courtesy, but I am letting that linger some, I think), so decided to add another older piece that I had thought forgotten. I came up with it while in Australia but never finished it until I got back to the States, mostly just editing of course. Really, I do not know who this is about, maybe someone or something evasive, just beyond my reach (it could certainly pass as a metaphor). Like I said in the prior post, sometimes I just write and let things sort themselves out later.
'Twilight's Curse'
She haunts me tho' I know her not,
Waiting in a realm unrevealed
Whilst this heart suffers
Between the shadows of day's fading might.
I see her in a so many waking dreams,
Calling me from the edge of dawn;
Yet we can never meet
'Twixt the glow of receding night.
We pass perhaps a thousand times,
Thoughts and souls meant for other days;
Whilst this mind regrets
Amid the caress of impending starlight.
She haunts me...
And still I do not wish to see,
For this heart cannot heal,
Occluded within the darkness and the light.
C.
27 February 2007
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Beautiful. Aoustralia does seam to have inspired quite a few pieces of poetry out of you hasn't it.
sounds like you need a holiday back to ..somewhere ;)
When's your birthday?
rav'n: Thanks, and yep, it has... sometimes a place or a moment can do that to you. I suppose I have had a lot of moments in those places.
m: Yeah, I wouldn't mind a holiday... somewhere, absolutely :)
becky: tomorrow (the 1st).
I enjoyed reading this poem, haunting yet calming...
That would be a pretty fair assessment... especially since it does have a dreamy-feel to it (at least that was some of my intent in writing :)
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